2006-09-11

Direction?

We flounder,
hoping our eyes will be open
the moment
our present tidepool
connects to the sea.

6 Comments:

Blogger tsduff said...

I'd love to know what inspired this post. I like tidepools - as viewed from without. Never lived in one.

2:07 AM, September 12, 2006  
Blogger Ultra Toast Mosha God said...

I like it.

Flounder - a fish AND flapping around without direction.

Clever!

5:36 PM, September 15, 2006  
Blogger Jeanne said...

UTMG,
I didn't (once again) do it on porpoise, but I did notice before I posted it, and let it stay. I cannot accept unearned credit.

5:40 PM, September 15, 2006  
Blogger Jeanne said...

Terry,
I was actually inspired by Steve's comment in my last post. I guess we all live in tidepools, nourished on occasion by a connectedness to ALL, and if unlucky or inobservant are perhaps inclined to believe there is no life beyond the mini-habitat.

5:44 PM, September 15, 2006  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Puns! Yay!

1:05 AM, September 18, 2006  
Blogger Ultra Toast Mosha God said...

Ho ho!

I made that porpoise joke on another blog last week!

Hee!

11:21 AM, September 25, 2006  

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